This blog post covers:
- Our rough cuts
- Audience feedback
1st ROUGH CUT
Things to improve on:
- Length of titles vary too much
- Audio bridge too long and enters too early
- Game audio in scene 1 too quiet
- Main title too simple
- Music shouldn't go over full opening
- need to rerecord some foley sound
- the wind in the outside scene breaks the verisimilitude
- remove the car scene at the end
- remove some shots
- shorten it
- be more consistent with titles
FEEDBACK
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We also received some written feedback giving us pointers on what to improve on...
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